when most of your other stories that I have read are not perfect but they are not really this bad. xxx video There were a lot of them in just the first few paragraphs.anonymous readerReport 2011-06-24 20:25:24My mom is my hero. I am guessing that you wrote this in your earlier years or someone else wrote it and you just posted it under your name. Bfanonymous readerReport 2011-06-24 23:12:33Sorry but it was too hard to read. 9 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-02-04 23:22:38Author, not to criticize but I do not understand why this particular story is so full of wrong spellings, wrong tense, wrong punctuation etc. I try to sympathize with new writers but this cannot be tolerated. There were a lot of them in just the first few paragraphs.anonymous readerReport 2011-06-24 20:25:24My mom is my hero.
