your a good writer made me hardanonymous readerReport 2011-12-13 23:43:24have you ever read mark twain . please look up the definition and example’s of first,second and third person rules.«1» but your dialog comes off as stited and chopy. xx video your a good writer made me hardanonymous readerReport 2011-12-13 23:43:24have you ever read mark twain . i only ask beause he is a prime example of multi-person viewpoints.he wrote seamlessly from one persons perspective to another.you seem to have a desire to do the same. 3 comments«1»Doozy woof HunterReport 2021-04-03 19:02:42Very different and well written…anonymous readerReport 2011-12-14 06:10:23hot story. please look up the definition and example’s of first,second and third person rules.«1» your a good writer made me hardanonymous readerReport 2011-12-13 23:43:24have you ever read mark twain . i only ask beause he is a prime example of
