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chip84freshmanReport 2009-02-10 02:23:18A bit short but still quite good will we be seeing anymore of the forced slavery of Rachael. Try composing your material better by using pargraphs it does make the story look better on paper and so more appealing to read!!!«12» Try composing your material better by using pargraphs it does make the story look better on paper and so more appealing to read!!!«12» 6 comments«12»slow2burnReport 2021-05-11 02:53:12What is a paragraph? xxx video many thanks
chip84freshmanReport 2009-02-10 02:23:18A bit short but still quite good will we be seeing anymore of the forced slavery of Rachael. Paragraphs add one idea at a time to your broader argument.Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-05 06:07:55Very good – however
