10 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-06-01 14:48:33so did Scorpion get his revenge?Anonymous readerReport 2010-04-12 01:35:55Though your story content is REALLY great, you need someone who knows how to spell AND knows something of how sentences are ended, as well as the proper spacing BEFORE the next sentence. xvideos 10 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-06-01 14:48:33so did Scorpion get his revenge?Anonymous readerReport 2010-04-12 01:35:55Though your story content is REALLY great, you need someone who knows how to spell AND knows something of how sentences are ended, as well as the proper spacing BEFORE the next sentence. In other words you are in DIRE need of someone who can proofread for you BEFORE you post your storiesAnonymous readerReport 2008-08-30 18:37:18learn grammar, to short, unrealkitty_wolfReport 2008-04-28 09:10:51that waas soooo shit!!READERReport 2007-12-15 02:07:46Wow. …that fucking sucked«12» In other words you are in DIRE need of someone who can
