Urfantasyman92 it was a good start a little short but I liked don’t let the spelling police keep u from making a part 2.anonymous readerReport 2011-12-30 05:17:10I have to agree with one of the comments. . xxvideo .Master_of_1Report 2012-01-01 17:21:48Very nice try but go at it again take ur time in ur writinganonymous readerReport 2011-12-31 03:18:56Wow Ive never seen so many people bitch about mistakes back the fuck off I read it just fine. 12 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2012-09-21 02:22:08Thrilling , teasing , sensual and sexually exciting gradually told buildup which keeps me rivoted , aroused and eagerly wanting more . Learn to read and write English before you attempt another story. Learn to read and write English before you attempt another story.
